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Flora's Dare (Flora Trilogy, #2)Flora's Dare by Ysabeau S. Wilce

My rating: 3 of 5 stars


More magical adventures in alternate world California with fabulous gender politics and a Central American imperial overlord.



I remember finding this light and charming, but with a few weeks distance the flaws loom larger. My God the sidekick is irritating. Mostly though I’m just deeply skeeved by some of the language choices, which I believe I complained of in the prequel, too. But really! Have your heroine say she was “going to the potty,” while she’s being sexually prayed on by an older man to emphasize her inexperience. But do you have to keep doing it later when she’s exploring her sexuality of her own will? The infantilism of her language was just weird, and it creeped me right out in multiple places.





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Flora Segunda: Being the Magickal Mishaps of a Girl of Spirit, Her Glass-Gazing Sidekick, Two Ominous Butlers (One Blue), a House with Eleven Thousand Rooms, and a Red Dog (Flora Trilogy, Book 1) Flora Segunda: Being the Magickal Mishaps of a Girl of Spirit, Her Glass-Gazing Sidekick, Two Ominous Butlers by Ysabeau S. Wilce


My rating: 3 of 5 stars
Check it out, it’s fantasy not Europe! As opposed to fantasy not!Europe, I mean. Young adult story of thirteen-year-old Flora’s magical exploits in alternate, militarized California.

You know how sometimes a young adult book can surprise you with its subtlety, its emotional complexity and maturity springing from a simple story? Yeah, this one went exactly the opposite direction: from a rich, textured, fascinating background world, and a well-drawn familial mess, and a lot of interesting political history springs your basic story of an adolescent doing a series of extremely foolish things, each in attempts to fix the results of the last. A perfectly passable story, though the sidekick was actually pretty annoying and I kept being irritated by the infantilism of Flora’s language – tummy? Potty? This girl is about to be enlisted in the military? Hokay.

But mostly I kept wanting to shove Flora and her endless toing and froing out of the way so I could get a better look at everything else. Because seriously, everything else is great, and I want to know all about it. Presumably it was magic that let the Central American empires survive, so did it also alter other European colonization patterns? Was it something other than gold that brought viable numbers west? What triggered such a radical revision of gender roles such that women serve – and command – without question? Alas, the book did not satisfy, but perhaps the sequel will.

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