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At the Feet of the Sun

4/5. Sequel to The Hands of the Emperor. Cliopher is an ase spectrum disaster for another 300,000 plus words, either you’re into it or you’re not.

I thought when reading Hands that this excessive, under-edited length is just how her brain works. Turns out it’s not – she can produce a tidy 100,000 word novel or a tight novella. No, apparently this is just how Cliopher books work. Which I guess follows since he can’t stop thinking to save his own life. Literally. I balanced on a knife’s edge through these many, many words. There’s going to be a third book, so quite probably over a million words of Cliopher’s particular brand of bullshit. And I simultaneously think that’s delightful in the wallowing in a million words of fanfic part of my brain, and also that it is a war crime because for the love of God, we would not need all these words if he would just learn to communicate JFC.

So yeah. It’s 300,000 words of Cliopher falling into his particular giant mental blind spots over and over and over again, punctuated by that luminous, grown-up folktale magic that she does so well.

And, I will admit to being wrong. I was pretty sure she was not going to let the queerplatonic relationship go anywhere, and she really does. Is it a satisfying place? To me, really no. I’m still unpacking that some because I’m not sure if my dissatisfaction is because they basically commit to a life partnership without ever once talking about some really important things, like how one of them is on the ase spectrum and one of them is not. Or is it that we get this whole thing from Cliopher’s perspective, and he is so thuddingly oblivious to sexual tension that his POV erases it entirely from the narrative? The first one is Cliopher not being a very good partner, which is on the book and on him, and the second one is me rarely finding ase narratives compelling, which is on me. The third book will tell. But if it takes another 300,000 words for Cliopher to work up to using some feeling words like a three-year-old, I might lose it.
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The Return of Fitzroy Angursell

4/5. A direct sequel to The Hands of the Emperor from a different POV, with a different tone, doing a very different thing. I really liked this one, though I think it would be confusing and somewhat unrewarding to start here. This book runs on improbable coincidences and – he would never call it this, but – providence. Also known as wild magic. It made me laugh out loud more than once. It’s about a person who has been so constrained, so controlled for so long that, when given freedom, he alternately runs to flood and freezes up. This book is about trying to ride that out, and reconnecting with friends of your old self who aren’t always great about understanding your new self, but you all love each other lots and so will keep trying. A re-found family book, if you will. Also trauma processing and magic. Lovely.

The Redoubtable Pali Avramapul

3/5. Sequel to the previous. A different POV of a few events from Hands of the Emperor and then after. I . . . this is awkward. I went in arms wide open to love Pali, since I apparently love all her other characters. And I just . . . didn’t. She’s hard to love, to be fair – she’s rigid and, in her word, “heartless.” Which is both an unfair assessment and accurate. But it means she has a particularly hard time not, you know, being an enormous asshole to a number of people, most centrally someone who really doesn’t need her crap. And I just was not really here for her journey of, IDK, being slightly less of an asshole.

It's one of those things where I had to interrogate my reaction because I’ve grumbled to myself about the lack of women in this universe, and then here I go disliking one of the most prominent women and finding her supposed old romance with redacted totally unconvincing and frankly off-putting. Was I just retreading the old sexist thought patterns so endemic to, say, slash fandom? Maybe, though I will say in my defense that I find her towering dislike of Cliopher both completely sensible from her perspective, and kind of funny, and honestly one of the most charming things about her, and I look forward to how that is either resolved or not resolved, however messily that is.
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A couple of novellas related to The Hands of the Emperor.

Portrait of a Wide Seas Islander

3/5. Alternate POV of events from partway through the novel; Cliopher’s Great Uncle isn’t necessarily more of a reliable narrator than Cliopher is, but the two different perspectives of a cultural right of passage are illuminating. But mostly, let’s be real, we all know this story exists in order for Buru Tovo to tell His Radiancy to his face, and I’m paraphrasing here, “Oh, yeah, I banged your uncle, who was not very good in the sack or out of it. I hope for Cliopher’s sake that you’re a better lay.” Seriously, though, it was nice to realize she actually can write a character with any sexual awareness whatsoever; Cliopher is super duper demisexual, as is another viewpoint character I've read, and redacted has clearly turned that entire part of himself off with a vengeance for self-protection. I was starting to think she didn't want or couldn't conceive of anyone to have a sexuality that is relevant to their daily lives at all.

Petty Treasons

4/5. Their meat cute imperial, and subsequent events, from His Radiancy’s POV. Oof. An effective use of shifting second and first person here, actualizing his deep self-alienation and depression. Beautiful and claustraphobic, like the room in which most of it takes place, with a POV that really does clarify a lot of things Cliopher doesn’t tell us in the novel.
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The Hands of the Emperor *


3/5. The Secretary to the last Emperor of a fallen magical empire asks His Radiancy on vacation, breaking all custom and taboo. Because that makes them actual friends, eventually, and then things start happening.

This book is extremely long, which gives it time to be both exactly what I wanted and deeply cringe. Here are some thoughts as scattered as the book

  • There are two major plot strands here – Cliopher’s growing relationship with His Radiancy, and Cliopher’s complicated family situation where his family doesn’t understand how important and special he is. This second plot gets dragged out over hundreds of pages of nonsense, culminating in a wildly overplayed emotional orgy of apologies and everybody learning how wrong they were and how special and admirable Cliopher really is. It’s a lot. The first plot, well. My suspicion is that she amped up the family plot because she knew the relationship plot was not going to be satisfying. It’s not, let’s be clear (and I’m not just saying that because the homoerotic subtext will, I suspect, remain subtext). They have a beautiful friendship, but a barrier remains between them, no matter how hard they both try, for reasons that do at least make sense. But what I don’t forgive is how she wrote more than three hundred thousand words of this stuff and then faded to black on a scene near the end where they practice touching each other how to greet people in a non-imperial way. It’s emotionally significant, it breaks a specific taboo in the book (no one touches the Emperor ever ever ever), and it bookends an earlier, beautifully sad scene where Cliopher has to wrap him in cloth to hold him while he breaks down. And yet. Fade to black. It’s a baffling choice for someone who clearly never met a scene she couldn’t write lushly and at great length.

  • On the one hand, this book is so long that pacing isn’t really a thing anymore. On the other hand, it has this trick of humming along smoothly in its grooves for a dozen chapters, then throwing a curveball of either emotion or magic with fast intensity. The first of these is the thing with the moon – you’ll know it when you get there – which made me sit bolt upright in bed and whisper what the fuck! to myself. Later examples are generally more emotional, but no less effective.

  • This book also does a really good job of that thing where it never actually sits down and explains to you the complicated and unusual magical backstory. You’ve just gotta pick it up, and boy howdy are you going to have a lot of questions for, like, a hundred thousand words.

  • One thread connecting the two plots is Cliopher’s relationship to his island culture, and what parts of that he brings with him to the empire which thinks him “primitive,” and how his culture measures accomplishment and success, and his place in his oral tradition, and how that intersects with his bureaucratic work building a new post-imperial government. It’s a lot – everything in this book is a lot – and parts of it are super interesting and parts of it really landed wrong with me. There’s one scene in particular that – well, I see what she was intending to do, but it struck me as an exercise in getting the colonizer stamp of approval. Like, oh, we see that you are not in fact primitive because you perform art that we deem sufficiently interesting.

  • We’re not even talking about the thing where Cliopher introduces universal basic income, or, you know, that little matter of His Radiancy’s real [redacted], which are both, like, a whole experience. IDK guys, this book contains multitudes.


Did I enjoy it? Oh yeah, when I wasn’t not enjoying it. And I have since delved into her catalog of connected novels, so brace yourselves is what I’m saying.

*IDK why it’s so ridiculously expensive; just buy the e-copy from her website directly.

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