Yeah, rain continues to make me gloomy even though I've lived here for almost 25 years :P Eventually I'll leave, I swear!
YK, I enjoyed Fair Game, but I must lodge a complaint about the sex scene. I'm reading along, enjoying some characters who are actually 3D and unique, a plot that kept me interested, a mystery that I didn't unravel half way through the book....and then there's this scene. This scene that I've read sooooo many times. This scene that could have been lifted from any slash fanfic in the past 15 years, without regard to character, story or description. Holy crap, the guy may have come up through the fanfic ranks, didn't he learn to write sex any more interesting than that????
I wanna send him to the resonant8 school of smutlet writing. C'mon Lanyon, you know we've all read that already, cause YOU'VE read it already!
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Date: 2010-11-18 05:18 am (UTC)YK, I enjoyed Fair Game, but I must lodge a complaint about the sex scene. I'm reading along, enjoying some characters who are actually 3D and unique, a plot that kept me interested, a mystery that I didn't unravel half way through the book....and then there's this scene. This scene that I've read sooooo many times. This scene that could have been lifted from any slash fanfic in the past 15 years, without regard to character, story or description. Holy crap, the guy may have come up through the fanfic ranks, didn't he learn to write sex any more interesting than that????
I wanna send him to the
*headdesk* I did like the book though :P