ext_125527 ([identity profile] lightreads.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lightreads 2009-09-18 05:42 pm (UTC)

This one was particularly bad. 'Waves of white silk' should not be a metaphor for pleasure, because . . . huh?

Also, you totally made me poke back through Res's fic. Not that that's a bad thing.

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