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lightreads ([personal profile] lightreads) wrote 2021-08-08 05:58 pm (UTC)

Yes. I think Jane getting a phone was supposed to right the power dynamic a bit but it's way too little. It would have helped a lot if Jane was able to appear consistently to many other people, whether August's friends or not, and had other relationships outside from the fleeting ones she is implied to have and the ones she gets only through August.


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